Web Design : My first try!

Hello everybody
this is my first try regarding WEBDESIGN
please tell me what you think, your remarks and especially your criticisms



I used only Photoshop cc
Thank you

I like it [MENTION=10402]s4mylacamora[/MENTION] , you should open a service for this kind of designing , good luck

Thank you [MENTION=1]Angemon[/MENTION] ♡
Soon why not