So i made a video on youtube...

[onsali20]

Hey guys i have a channel and i like making videos on it so i recently made a new video which is
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y_-QcSeAjpY&list=UU0f4wAA98GeNWCzD9oRSMXQ
So i just wanted you guys help and tips on how i can improve that would mean alot to me!
Thanks,

[garywelsh]

Hmmm, I am not sure if you want my true impression of this video man so I will say you need to work a little harder on your craft. First impression is key to everything. That may decided if someone will want to visit back your channel in the future..

I hope this helps

Regards

[Jerry5]

OK I will watch the video

[medsamy]

its a pub , noo ? ist yours ??

[juicy]

lol nice hair